...was astronomical, but I was finally able to see it. In return for the gift I offered It rose above us, towering, and I wept. My god! My savior! You arrived.
It seems like there are alternate lines or something.
"Coursing through me was the divinity of our savior felt all over!" "...and the prickle was felt all over!"
And then....
"If I reached out, I knew it would extend itself toward me, and I would feel the brush of our savior...stretched toward Heaven!" "...stretched toward Heaven! If I reached out, I knew it would beat forevermore, and our savior's life could never be extinguished.”
The wording is really similar. I'm also not sure about the parts in the brackets, or even the order of that one.
Shouldn't it be like....
A most melodius voice spoke to us! (I've made it past four days.) I could listen to your testaments forever, (Not you, though I should have from the beginning.) with a grin spread from ear to ear.
Or...
A most melodius voice spoke to us! I could listen to your testaments forever, (Not you, though I should have from the beginning.) with a grin spread from ear to ear. (I've made it past four days.) ]
I figured mine was just repetition, rather than alternate lines. So it'd be something like --
If I reached out, I knew it would extend itself toward me, and I would feel the brush of our savior ...stretched toward Heaven! If I reached out, I knew it would beat forevermore, and our savior's life could never be extinguished.
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...was astronomical, but I was finally able to see it.
In return for the gift I offered
It rose above us, towering, and I wept.
My god! My savior! You arrived.
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Just got this, too. Oh, and... "...and the prickle was felt all over!"
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"Coursing through me was the divinity of our savior felt all over!"
"...and the prickle was felt all over!"
And then....
"If I reached out, I knew it would extend itself toward me, and I would feel the brush of our savior...stretched toward Heaven!"
"...stretched toward Heaven! If I reached out, I knew it would beat forevermore, and our savior's life could never be extinguished.”
The wording is really similar. I'm also not sure about the parts in the brackets, or even the order of that one.
Shouldn't it be like....
A most melodius voice spoke to us!
(I've made it past four days.)
I could listen to your testaments forever,
(Not you, though I should have from the beginning.)
with a grin spread from ear to ear.
Or...
A most melodius voice spoke to us!
I could listen to your testaments forever,
(Not you, though I should have from the beginning.)
with a grin spread from ear to ear.
(I've made it past four days.) ]
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If I reached out, I knew it would extend itself toward me,
and I would feel the brush of our savior
...stretched toward Heaven!
If I reached out, I knew it would beat forevermore,
and our savior's life could never be extinguished.
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[ also updates for post-totty ]
And now we have "...looking from within the darkness at me! I felt seen by the savior all the way to the pit of my soul."